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« Thread Started on Oct 10, 2008, 4:59pm »

It was a Saturday night around 2 O'clock in the morning. Bo was dressed wearing all black. Black pants, black hoodie jacket and black shirt under his jacket. His cheek bone was bruised from a fight the other night and he had a small cut on his face but nothing big. He had a glock handgun strapped to his hip but was covered by the jcaket. He slid the hood over his head as he walked along the street, looking for a good place to hit. Upon reaching a house he glanced around, looking inside of it to see a few things worth breaking in. So Bo tried to quietly open the door. Believe it or not, some idiots left the front door open. Nope. It was locked. He sighed, knowing he'd have to break in a window or find another way in. Then he remembered his pick lock stuff.

He pulled that out, returning to the front door and quietly unlocking the door. He removed the item, placing it back in his backpocket. He quietly stepped inside, closing the door behind him, making sure to be quiet. Bo looked around, taking a deep breath as he started to quietly tip toe around the house, picking up a few things that looked like he could get some money of them. Little did he know a cop lived here.
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« Reply #1 on Oct 10, 2008, 6:17pm »

JJ was up late again, well, technically up early because it was morning now, doing media reports and filling in information for the press from the last case they had. The last case was about a man and his two kids being murdered in there own home, and the killer was murdering more parents and children. She had to hide a lot from the press, but now that the case was solved and the killer put away, she could give them the rest of the information to let out to the public. As she was finishing a report, getting even more tired by the minute that past, she thought she heard footsteps. She paused in her writing, unsure if it was the pounding of her head, the passing cars and music from a club a ways down the road, or something else. She couldn't really make it out, though. Her 9mm Pistol was lying on the desk where she left it, with her badge, and her cell which she turned off because it was about to die and she couldn't find the charger. She doubted that it was anything, but she decided to check it out anyways. It wouldn't hurt to take a walk through the house.

JJ got up and, for some reason that she did not know, grabbed her gun, before heading down the hall. As she came closer to the entrance she realized that it was footsteps that she heard. Great, she thought, reaching towards her gun now. She had pocketed it, not knowing if she would need it or not. She felt a pang of alarm in her chest though, even though she struggled to keep calm. She didn't want the intruder to know someone knew of his/her presence, although she had no idea where he or she was now...
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« Reply #2 on Oct 10, 2008, 7:09pm »

Bo was just about to leave when he heard footsteps. He held his breath, hiding behind a wall away from the footsteps. He wasn't sure if he should pull his gun or make a run for it. He slowly and quietly set the stuff down, pocketing the most vauble things before drawing his own weapon quietly. He moved around the house, so he was behind the woman. He tried to quickly walk up behind her, place the barrel of the gun against her temple and gripp her shoulders in his strong arm.

He said "Don't scream or I'll blow your brains out." He hadn't seen the gun yet. He didn't know she was a cop. All he knew was he felt like a caged animal for being caught. And when Bo felt caged he could turn deadly.
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« Reply #3 on Oct 10, 2008, 7:36pm »

JJ froze feeling the gun against her head, as did her hand. She hadn't pulled it out yet, so she left it. The voice told her the intruder was a man, although, the strength in his arm seemed to tell her as well. Screaming was surprisingly the last thing on her mind at the moment, the first being, who was he? The fear came after as her mind registered the danger, and she knew she would have to try and negotiate. "What do you want?" She murmured quietly. She wished she was as good with the situations as Hotch or Rossi were, but she really wasn't a field agent like they were.
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